Antia in Tagar

Antia.

“Come on, Tamara!”

“You’ll defeat her!”

“You won’t live, Antia!”

Antia. That’s me. The one who had the guts to fight against Tamara the Tagar heroine! Oh, you should have seen this heroine! Tall, old, skinny, and combined with the traditional a-ghesh equipment, spear and shield, looks ridiculous. And they say she’ll defeat me!

I know much about a-ghesh warriors. Tayunna, my dear teacher, told me of them, of Tagar, of their traditions. And she also told me of a little trick that helped her defeat several a-ghesh women! To tell the truth, I was surprised, for the trick seemed too obvious. Nevertheless, I’ve a chance to test it... right now.

I start approaching Tamara, slowly, slowly. The shouts of her friends weaken, they are all interested to see what happens next. Tamara is already tired, she is not used to long fights, she breathes quickly and her large mouth seems even larger. Come to me, heroine. I hold up my saber and as if accidentally uncover the chest...

Tamara.

“Come on, Tamara!”

“You’ll defeat her!”

Thank you, my dear! Thank you, Ritta! But I can’t defeat the amazon so far. Vast and buxom, Antia seemed to me awkward when I first saw her. Moreover, they say she’s only 23 summers old – how can such a young one fight well? But minute after minute this buxom bitch keeps the distance. A little fear starts to wake in me. I try not to panic: I am Tamara, I’m 36, I’ve been warrior for 20 years already, and I’ve fought in the respected a-ghesh position for 10 years! I attack again – and again the dexterous bitch dodges from the blow. Something starts to ache in my breast... I was so afraid of it! My breast – the breast of a mother – is growing tired of the fight too soon. And I start to lose my breath...

Oh... It’s getting worse and worse. The pain grows. It’s so hard to breathe... Antia is smiling to herself. I don’t care! I start breathing trough my mouth. But it doesn’t seem to help. It’s about time to finish this dance! The amazon seems tired, too. Uh-huh! She’s tired – her armed hand is lowering! I slowly take the position for the jab. Her shield is a little insecure, and I can see her large, milk-white breast. Now!

Antia.

Come to me, heroine. I hold up my saber and as if accidentally uncover the chest. A tiny step forward, and Tamara attacks, aiming at the uncovered spot. I quickly hold up the shield, the spear thuds into the wood covered by leather and slides down. Now!

I take a large step backwards. Tamara follows me, quickly raises her spear and – indeed! – uncovers her belly!!!

I fall on my left knee. (The right one is too weak, so I don’t trust it too much.) When Tamara starts the jab, I plunge my saber right in the middle of her belly!

Tamara.

What is that? What? Oooooh... The pain! What is the matter with my belly? Something bursts inside, and I feel something strange, cold, hard in me! I look down... Oh no! There’s her sword in my belly! Why is that?! How is that?!

“Tamara! What’s the matter with you?” cries Ritta. I try to call her, but my tongue won’t move. Only a moan comes out from my mouth.

The pain grows stronger, overwhelming me. How hard! How silly! What will Ritta say? Oooh, not the belly, not the guts... What is the matter with my legs?!

Antia.

And for a few moments the time stops. I still cannot believe that the trick worked, that I hit the rival, that I defeated Tamara... The wounded a-ghesh warrior freezes in an awkward position, with a raised spear in her hand; her friends are struck, none of them speaks. I can only hear my own heart beating. I will remember this moment for ever.

I push the saber out. Tamara moans and fall on her knees, then on the ground. I stand up, shield and saber in my hands, and look at her. The wound is right under her navel, she covers it with her long thin hands. I’ve won. I’ve defeated the Tagar heroine! I’ve defeated Tamara!

I wipe the sword in the grass. The wounded warrior shivers, her pale face reflects agony and suffering. I understand it’s a very hard blow for her – be defeated at home, in Tagar, before her friends! Her agony will be long and terrible. And nobody will help her. Her friends are silent, Ritta ran to the wounded woman, knelt to her and whispers something in her ear... Tamara answers slowly, she is on the edge, in a little while she’ll start wiggling in the grass and moaning. She says she didn’t expect such a mean trick from me, that she cannot bear the pain... Ritta is holding her hand.

Finally, Ritta rises and approaches me.

“You’ve won, Antia,” she says quietly, staring at me with her dark eyes. “You’ve shown skill in combat, and now you can show nobleness by freeing Tamara from long painful death!”

“There’s no reason for me to make her agony longer,” I answer, “but let Tamara ask me for that herself!”

I kneel next to her and call her name.

“Tamara, I’ve wounded you in the belly! Your death will be long, and the agony will be horrible! Say yourself defeated – and die quickly, without suffering!”

She moans.

“Antia...” she whispers harshly. “Antia... what have you done...”

Her foot is scratching the grass near her useless shield.

“The pain...” she chokes and then adds quickly, “Kill me, Antia... I cannot... the pain...”

With a great effort she turns over onto her back. One by one she relaxes her legs. She is very pale, but seems calmer since it’s all going to end now. I put the tip of my sword to her soft left breast. I try to look her in the eyes, but they are closed.

She just trembled. Nothing more.

The End.

Copyright by Nica (2003).

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